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[IELTS Speaking: ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์Šต๊ด€๊ณผ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ธ ํ‘œํ˜„๋ฒ•]-[๐Ÿ–‹ Writing (Part 1) + Transcript]

IELTS Speaking for Success ยท B1 ยท 2025-09-09

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๋˜๋Š” ์›น๋ฒ„์ „์œผ๋กœ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜์„ธ์š” โ†’

๐Ÿ“‹ Summary

ํ˜„๋Œ€์ธ์˜ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์Šต๊ด€๊ณผ IELTS ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ „๋žต

์ด ํŒŸ์บ์ŠคํŠธ ์—ํ”ผ์†Œ๋“œ์—์„œ๋Š” '๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ(Writing)'๋ผ๋Š” ์ฃผ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ์ผ์ƒ์ ์ธ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์Šต๊ด€๊ณผ ์ด๋ฅผ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ๋‹ค๋ฃน๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ˜ธ์ŠคํŠธ์ธ ๋กœ๋ฆฌ(Rory)์™€ ๋งˆ๋ฆฌ์•”(Mariam)์€ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ์˜ ์ •์˜๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋„๊ตฌ์˜ ์„ ํƒ, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์Šต๊ด€์˜ ๋ณ€ํ™”์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์‹ฌ๋„ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ๋‚˜๋ˆ•๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

1. ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ์˜ ์–‘๊ณผ ์งˆ: 'Write a great deal' vs 'Don't write much'

๋กœ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ž์‹ ์ด ๊ณผ๊ฑฐ์— ์ฑ…์„ ์ง‘ํ•„ํ–ˆ๋˜ ๊ฒฝํ—˜๊ณผ ๋น„๊ตํ•˜๋ฉฐ, ํ˜„์žฌ๋Š” ๊ณผ๊ฑฐ๋งŒํผ ๋งŽ์€ ์–‘์˜ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ์ง€๋Š” ์•Š์ง€๋งŒ ์—ฌ์ „ํžˆ ํ‰๊ท ์ ์ธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋ณด๋‹ค๋Š” ๋งŽ์ด ์“ด๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Š” ์ˆ˜์—… ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์„ธ์šฐ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์ฑ…์— ๊ด€ํ•œ ๋…ธํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•˜๋Š” ๋“ฑ ์—…๋ฌด์ƒ 'put together notes'๊ฐ€ ํ•„์ˆ˜์ ์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฒญ์ทจ์ž๋“ค์€ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์ˆ˜์ค€์„ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•  ๋•Œ 'I don't write a great deal' ํ˜น์€ 'I write more than the average person'๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ํ™œ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2. ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๋„๊ตฌ์™€ ๋ฐฉ์‹: ์ˆ˜๊ธฐ(Handwriting)์™€ ํƒ€์ดํ•‘(Typing)

๊ธ€์„ ์“ธ ๋•Œ ํŽœ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๋นˆ๋„์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋กœ๋ฆฌ๋Š” 'every day'๋ผ๊ณ  ๋‹ตํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Š” ์ผ๊ธฐ๋‚˜ ์ˆ˜์—… ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๊ณ , ๋Œ€ํ™” ์ค‘ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ 'take notes'ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ 'jot down(๊ธ‰ํžˆ ์ ๋‹ค)'ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šต๊ด€์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŠนํžˆ 'jot down'์€ ์ผ์ƒ์ ์ธ ๋ฉ”๋ชจ๋ฅผ ํ•  ๋•Œ ๋งค์šฐ ์œ ์šฉํ•œ ๊ตฌ๋™์‚ฌ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๋˜ํ•œ, ๊ธด ๊ธ€์„ ์“ธ ๋•Œ๋Š” ์ˆ˜๊ธฐ๋กœ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•œ ๋’ค AI์—๊ฒŒ ๋ฐ›์•„์“ฐ๊ฒŒ ํ•˜์—ฌ ํ…์ŠคํŠธํ™”ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ์‹์„ ์„ ํ˜ธํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋ฐํ˜”์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด, ์งง์€ ๊ธ€์€ ํƒ€์ดํ•‘์„ ์„ ํ˜ธํ•˜๋Š”๋ฐ, ์ด๋Š” ์†๋ชฉ์˜ ํ”ผ๋กœ๋ฅผ ์ค„์ด๊ณ  'repetitive strain injury(๋ฐ˜๋ณต์„ฑ ๊ธด์žฅ์„ฑ ์†์ƒ)'๋ฅผ ๋ฐฉ์ง€ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•จ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ˆ˜๊ธฐ๋กœ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ธ ๋•Œ๋Š” 'write by hand'๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์„, ํŽœ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” 'write with a pen'์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ „์น˜์‚ฌ ์‚ฌ์šฉ์— ์ฃผ์˜ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3. ๋ฏธ๋ž˜์˜ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๋ณ€ํ™”์™€ ์ผ์ƒ์˜ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ

๋กœ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ต์‚ฌ๋ผ๋Š” ์ง์—…์  ํŠน์„ฑ์ƒ ์•ž์œผ๋กœ๋„ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์„ธ์šฐ๊ณ  ์ด๋ฅผ ๊ธฐ๋กํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ์‹์€ ๋ณ€ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์˜ˆ์ธกํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค๋งŒ ๋‚ด์šฉ(content)์€ ๋ฐ”๋€” ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด๋„ ํ˜•์‹(format)์€ ์œ ์ง€๋  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ ๋ด…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ ๋‘ ํ˜ธ์ŠคํŠธ๋Š” ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์ผ์ƒ์—์„œ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋…ผ์˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์—๋Š” ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ํ™œ๋™๋“ค์ด ํฌํ•จ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค:

  • To-do lists ๋ฐ ์‡ผํ•‘ ๋ฆฌ์ŠคํŠธ ์ž‘์„ฑ: ์ผ์ƒ์„ ๊ด€๋ฆฌํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์ธ ๋ฐฉ์‹์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • ์†Œ์…œ ๋ฏธ๋””์–ด ๋Œ“๊ธ€ ๋ฐ ๋ฉ”์‹œ์ง€: ํ˜„๋Œ€์ธ๋“ค์ด ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋งŽ์ด ํ•˜๋Š” '๋””์ง€ํ„ธ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ' ํ˜•ํƒœ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • ๊ธฐํƒ€: ์‹ ์ฒญ์„œ ์ž‘์„ฑ, ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ๋ณด๋‚ด๊ธฐ ๋“ฑ. ๋กœ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์ž‘์„ฑ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ํƒ€์ดํ•‘์„ ํ•˜๋Š” ํ–‰์œ„ ์—ญ์‹œ ๋„“์€ ์˜๋ฏธ์˜ 'writing'์— ํฌํ•จ๋œ๋‹ค๋Š” ์ ์„ ๊ฐ•์กฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด ์—ํ”ผ์†Œ๋“œ๋Š” IELTS ์ˆ˜ํ—˜์ƒ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ผ๋Š” ํ‰๋ฒ”ํ•œ ์ฃผ์ œ๋ฅผ ๋‹ค๋ฃฐ ๋•Œ, ๋‹จ์ˆœํžˆ '์“ด๋‹ค'๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ๋„˜์–ด ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์ธ ์Šต๊ด€๊ณผ ๋„๊ตฌ, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ทธ ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๐ŸŽฏKey Sentences

1
Well, that depends on how you define a lot, I suppose.
๊ธ€์Ž„์š”, '๋งŽ๋‹ค'๋Š” ๊ฑธ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์ •์˜ํ•˜๋А๋ƒ์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ๋‹ค๋ฅด๊ฒ ์ฃ .
2
I don't have much time for it these days, sadly.
์š”์ฆ˜์€ ํ†ต ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ์—†์–ด์„œ, ์•ˆํƒ€๊น๊ฒŒ๋„.
3
Plus the need isn't really there, given how saturated the market and internet are with these things.
๊ฒŒ๋‹ค๊ฐ€ ์‹œ์žฅ๊ณผ ์ธํ„ฐ๋„ท์— ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ์ด๋ฏธ ๋„˜์ณ๋‚˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋”ฑํžˆ ํ•„์š”์„ฑ๋„ ๋А๊ปด์ง€์ง€ ์•Š์•„์š”.
4
It's just the volume is not so high.
๋‹ค๋งŒ ์Œ๋Ÿ‰์ด ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ ํฌ์ง€ ์•Š์•„์š”.
5
If I didn't do that, then I'd forget everything that happens or needs to happen throughout the day.
๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์œผ๋ฉด ํ•˜๋ฃจ ๋™์•ˆ ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์ด ์ผ์–ด๋‚˜๋Š”์ง€, ๋˜ ์•ž์œผ๋กœ ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์„ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š”์ง€ ์ „๋ถ€ ์žŠ์–ด๋ฒ„๋ฆด ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”.
๋ชจ๋‘ ํŽผ์น˜๊ธฐ

๐Ÿ“Key Phrases

1
I don't write a great deal
๊ธ€์„ ๋งŽ์ด ์“ฐ๋Š” ํŽธ์€ ์•„๋‹ˆ์—์š”.
2
put together notes
๋ฉ”๋ชจ๋“ค์„ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•˜๋‹ค
3
saturated the market
์‹œ์žฅ์ด ํฌํ™” ์ƒํƒœ์— ์ด๋ฅด๋ €๋‹ค
4
have a record of
๊ธฐ๋ก์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค
5
bits and pieces
์žํˆฌ๋ฆฌ
๋ชจ๋‘ ํŽผ์น˜๊ธฐ

๐Ÿ“– Transcript

Raise the rudder.
Raise the sails.
Raise the sails.
Captain, an unidentified ship is approaching.
Over.
Roger.

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