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My name is Daphne and today I'm going to focus on task one map questions which like the process diagrams or flowcharts are a bit more unusual but nevertheless it's really important to be able to answer them and to have had a bit of practice before your exam.
So today we're going to do three things.
We're going to look at a task one map question from our great IELTSpodcast .com course using two students' essays and seeing why one scored a bound 7 .5 and the other scored a bound 6.
And we'll look at another task map question from a course book and see how we could answer this one.
And then I want to give you lots of really useful and important vocab, which is crucial, that's to say really important, for successfully answering these questions in your exam.
Okay, so here we go.
On the website that goes with this, you'll be able to see all the diagrams. So, have a look at these, as this will help you to understand and visualise what I'm talking about.
So, to guide you, I've colour -coded my corrections and recommendations to make sure that they correspond really easily to the band grades we're talking about.
As you know, there's four areas of assessment so top comments I make to do with task achievement I'm going to mark in red coherence and cohesion blue let's go resource green grammatical region accuracy purple so if you haven't yet come across the task one map question they usually consist of two maps which might be of a landscape or island or a town one before and one after some kind of change and the question rubric asks you to summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons when necessary.
And like other task ones the guide suggests 20 minutes of time and to write at least 150 words.
So the one we're going to look at is the map question which is part of our writing course and you can find about more about that on the out podcast .com website the writing course is brilliant we see our students making great improvements with all parts of their writing task one and task two getting lots of practice on these different questions so on this image there are two almost rectangular islands before and after some development work on the first one we can see a beach on the western side and then only nine trees or wooded areas scattered around the island, some on the north - western corner,
some on the north - eastern coast and others located to the south.
In the after picture there are some accommodation blocks.
These are labelled accommodation blocks on the diagram on the western side, three larger independent buildings in the centre and next two further accommodation blocks in a circular shape.
On the right -hand side of the map is a map, on the right -hand side is a lake.
So, footpaths and a vehicle track link the new buildings to a newly developed pier.
So, a pier sticks out into the sea and there's a few sailing boats in the sea.
So, you can hear, if you're listening carefully, I'm already using quite specific language to describe directions.
This is really important, you are going to need this and this kind of task.
On the left -hand side or western side, in the northwestern corner, to the south, in the centre, to the east of, and so on.
So, make sure you're happy about directions, north, south, east, west, and then the more specific, northwest, southeast, and so on.
Also note in English, we write these directions without a capital letter.
They can work as adjectives.
So, So in the southwestern corner or as a noun, simply in the northeast. So how do we start with these questions?
So quite simply, the same way as I recommend you start with a pie chart or a line graph, you take a pencil and you circle the significant differences between the two images.
Look for clues. And in this map, there are two or three huge clues which many students miss or don't really think about what the clues are kind of saying before they start.
So the clues here are really important to answering the task correctly.
The first clue. If there is one, look at the scale.
This is the clue to how big the island really is.
Now, this island is actually really small.
It's only about 500 metres, half a kilometre long.
And this must give us a clue as to what kind of development has taken place.
it is far more likely to be a holiday resort than a large new urban town now any uh kind of questions i read any responses i read that talk to me about urban regeneration no it definitely could not be that on such a small island also it has no roads that would be a problem other clues are in the labels so look carefully if you're given any labels look at these really carefully too.
Words like accommodation and footpath are more likely to be associated with a hotel or resort than a big new town.
Finally, the drawing of the two sailing boats in the after picture also add to the idea of this being a holiday resort.
So let's look at these two students' essays and see how they answered this question.
So the first one, which is graded around about a band 6 starts.
The illustration shows a piece of land before and after it went through a process of civilisation, okay, where the second one, which is more like a band 7, 7 .5, begins, the two maps represent a plan of construction for a new resort on a previously undeveloped island, so immediately you can see which one gives me more information and the second one is making some something's very clear.
The students looked at the scale, assumed the changes are part of a resort development, and told me the island was previously underdeveloped.
So these observations will help score highly for task achievement.
The first one talks about the process of civilisation, which is not wrong, but it doesn't sound very natural.
The overall sentences look like this.
the first one says overall there are significant changes can be found so we should correct that significant changes can be found in the island particularly the new accommodation facilities public buildings at the center and see transportation at the southern part so let's look at this in more detail significant we like that word so they talk about significant changes can be found.
So, nice passive voice, that's great.
New accommodation, yes, fine, that's labelled, so we know what that is.
Public buildings, I'm not sure about this.
So, for me, a public building is like a library or a museum, something big.
Sea transportation, again, not sure.
There's a picture of two small sailing boats, whereas sea transportation is suggesting to me a big cargo ship so I don't think the students really understood the scale of the map and because of this their understanding of the changes isn't right and this would impact on task achievement there's some language used for directions at the center and at the southern part but the wrong preposition so we would say in the center and in the south of the island so the second essay reads overall the The resort will be built all over the island and will include a hotel, a reception, houses, an artificial
lake and a pier. Now, you may notice here that there is the future passive voice.
This is quite unusual.
It runs throughout this essay.
It's been done very well.
It's correct all the way through.
Personally, however, I'm not sure about the use of the future here.
here, but in the first sentence, the students already suggested that the maps were a plan of construction, which would suggest a future idea.
Imagine that there were two architects looking at maps, so that's why they're using the future voice here.
I think it would have been better to use the present perfect passive followed by the present tense.
So, my sentence would read, overall, the island has been transformed into a new resort which which includes, and then you could say your hotel, your reception, whatever.
Okay, so let's look at the first essay again.
This is the next paragraph.
The piece of land presented has a wide seashore with only about a fifth of its borders tied to land.
During the process of civilization the area went through, the vegetation there was reduced extraordinarily and both residences and buildings of social use were built, one of them being a pier in order to make use of the territory's shore.
Another noticeable change was the appearance of a lake.
Right. So, there's some good stuff here.
Nice passive verbs.
Vegetation was reduced.
Residences were built.
And some good lexical phrases.
So, a fifth of its borders tied to land during the process of civilization.
One of them being a pier in order to make blah, blah, blah.
Okay, so there's some nice stuff going on there.
However, my biggest problem is how this relates to the actual picture.
So, because this is an island, none of it is connected to land.
An island is not connected to land.
So, in terms of coherence and lexus, we wouldn't talk about buildings of social use, but we'd probably say residential buildings.
And I'm not sure about, but for me, the process of civilization sounds more like evolution, like how man came into being.
So I would prefer to say the development phase, something like that, or the development stage.
So there's problems there relating to the coherence and also, obviously, to the task achievement, although there is some good stuff there too.
So the second essay, for me, is much more concise and precise.
And I think from this, you could probably draw the map, which is always is a test. If you can draw the map then that's good without even looking at it.
So the island is about 200 meters long and 800 meters wide.
It is surrounded by the sea and with a beach on the west side.
There are also some trees at various places close to the coast. According to the new plan there will be a hotel with a reception and one more facility building in the centre of the the island, while on both sides of the hotel there will be placed houses as accommodation for guests.
So, there's confident use here of the present passive voice.
It is surrounded by the sea.
A hotel will be placed.
And I like the fact that the student's given me a size of the island and used vocabulary relating to resorts.
So, a nice lexical range here.
Hotel, reception, facility building, accommodation for guests.
This all works well with the assumption that the changes are part of a new resort.
And showing me the size of the island immediately reassures me, the student, aha, they've looked at the information they've been given, they're using that information to make some realistic assumptions.
The first essay, back to the the first essay then, the final paragraph reads like this.
The town, as it presents itself after all the modifications, displays three main buildings at its centre and two formations of the house accommodations, one on each side.
There are two different kinds of path in the land's disposition, a footpath and a vehicle track that connect all main areas and enable the citizens' and mobility.
OK, so although there are no major grammatical errors here, there is still the problem that the construction work is clearly not a town, and I think the students therefore miss the opportunity to use some key vocab for adding geographical positioning.
So, we could have had to the south -west, accommodation blocks have been built, on the far eastern shore, a lake has been created.
Also, the tense running through this, they've just used the simple present and I think this task, so like the process diagrams as well, shouts at you, use the passive tense.
It's a passive voice.
It is the best opportunity to show off your passive, which is really, really important.
And that gets you good points for grammatical range and accuracy.
accuracy. So the second essay, the Band 7 final paragraph is as follows.
The hotel, the reception and the facility building will be connected by a vehicle track, while between the houses there will be footpaths.
On the southern coast, a pier will be placed to provide a safe port for sailing boats.
There is also a plan to create an artificial lake on the east end of the island.
Comparing to the initial, so compared to should be, the initial look of the island, only the beach and some trees will be in the same place while the general prospects of the island will change significantly.
Okay, so I'm sure you agree.
This is much more coherent and all in all a very good response.
There's some great vocab which is just what we need.
We're talking about useful vocab for this kind of task.
Connected by, placed, positioned, create, change significantly.
I love the word significantly.
So for me, that's a great word. And grammatically, the student continues with the future passive.
That's how they've started.
So, at least they're consistent going all the way through.
And use some good connecting words.
While, really useful connecting word. You've heard us say that before.
And also, compared to.
Obviously, because they're comparing the first picture before the development and then the second picture.
Okay. So, hopefully, that's given you an idea there for that kind of map question.
What to do and what to watch out for.
Let's have a look now at a different kind of map question.
This image is taken from the course book called Ready for IELTS, published by Mellon Exams, and here there're two maps dated 2000 -2009 representing changes in a town and it clearly gives the name of the town, which is Lakeside.
So, let me read you a few sentences from the sample answer which is given to this question just to illustrate some useful vocab for this kind of task.
So firstly, the residential area and neighborhood in the southwest of the town was transformed into a shopping center and the industrial complex expanded to replace the wooded area in the southeast. Okay that's a pretty intense sentence.
So the response is using some of the labels given so it is quite clearly labeled this map and it's okay the labels are there to help you you can do that but it also uses some really good vocabulary for describing change and some very good passive verbs and geographical Lexus as well so you can see that the southwest of the town was transformed so nice geographical and nice passive and again industrial complex expanded to replace the wooded area in the southeast so every single word there is doing a really good job.
Another sentence, let me give you an example.
The old town and derelict warehouse in the North were knocked down and replaced by a car park and the construction of some offices.
So, the old town and derelict warehouse, really useful adjectives there.
Derelict means not used anymore, abandoned.
In the North were knocked down and replaced by.
So, So, you've got nice phrasal verb there, knocked down in the passive and replaced by.
Watch out for these prepositions, replaced by, really important, expanded to.
Always learn the preposition with the verb and construction of some offices.
Okay, so there's some good stuff in that one.
See, have a look at the picture.
Maybe you can see if you can write your own response to that using some of the words that we're using here, we're mentioning.
And I want to just sum up this tutorial here by giving you some really useful words and some vocab, which you could use for these questions.
So, if you're not happy with this vocab, make a note of it because it is really, really important.
I would suggest verbs such as transformed into.
So, watch out for the prepositions here.
Replaced by, developed, expanded.
So, we can have expand, into, something like that, construct, demolish, extend, and become.
These are all really, really good verbs here.
Now, if you like playing with words, a transformation, you will know that as an extra bonus, these can all be transformed into nouns.
So, you can have development, construction, demolition, extension, expansion, and so on.
So, that makes these words super flexible and will show a great lexical range.
You're showing the examiner you can manipulate these words from a verb to a noun, even as an adjective, some of them.
So, that's really, really helpful.
You can also use some expressions.
So, built in place of, turned into, built on the site of, reconstructed to become, and other really useful expressions.
so these are nice collocations here, urban transformation, urban renewal or urban regeneration.
Not only is this quite good vocab for the task one maps, it's also really useful for your task two essays as well, especially if you're writing about towns or anything to do with that.
So, there we have it.
We have looked at a band six type task one map essay and compared this to a band 7 map essay we've also looked at another type of map question the one about towns and reviewed some core vocabulary which I think is needed for this kind of question.
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