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[์˜จ๋ผ์ธ IELTS ๋ผ์ดํŒ… ์ฑ„์  ๋„๊ตฌ์˜ ์‹คํšจ์„ฑ ๋ถ„์„ ๋ฐ ํ™œ์šฉ๋ฒ•]-[๐Ÿ“ Which is the best (free) online IELTS writing checker?]

IELTS with Fiona: a comprehensive guide to IELTS ยท B1 ยท 2023-03-23

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๐Ÿ“‹ Summary

์˜จ๋ผ์ธ IELTS ๋ผ์ดํŒ… ์ฑ„์  ๋„๊ตฌ์˜ ์‹ ๋ขฐ์„ฑ๊ณผ ํ•œ๊ณ„

์ตœ๊ทผ IELTS ์ˆ˜ํ—˜์ƒ๋“ค ์‚ฌ์ด์—์„œ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๋ผ์ดํŒ… ์ ์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์˜จ๋ผ์ธ ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ ์ฑ„์  ๋„๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•„์กŒ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ณธ ํŒŸ์บ์ŠคํŠธ์—์„œ Fiona๋Š” ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์˜จ๋ผ์ธ ๋„๊ตฌ๋“ค์„ ์ง์ ‘ ํ…Œ์ŠคํŠธํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ๊ทธ ์‹คํšจ์„ฑ์„ ๊ฒ€์ฆํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฒฐ๋ก ์ ์œผ๋กœ, ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ AI ๋„๊ตฌ๋“ค์€ ํ•™์Šต์— ๋„์›€์„ ์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ, ๊ทธ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๋งน์‹ ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ์•ˆ ๋˜๋ฉฐ ๋น„ํŒ์ ์ธ ์‹œ๊ฐ์œผ๋กœ ์ ‘๊ทผํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

1. ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ AI ์ฑ„์  ๋„๊ตฌ๋“ค์˜ ๋ฌธ์ œ์ 

Fiona๋Š” ieltscdt.com, ieltspodcast.com, EssayChecker.ai ๋“ฑ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ํ”Œ๋žซํผ์„ ํ…Œ์ŠคํŠธํ–ˆ์œผ๋‚˜, ๋Œ€๋ถ€๋ถ„ ์‹ค๋ง์Šค๋Ÿฌ์šด ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๋ณด์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

  • ์ •ํ™•๋„ ๋ถ€์กฑ: ieltscdt.com์˜ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ, ์ ์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ํผ์„ผํŠธ ๋‹จ์œ„๋กœ ์ œ์‹œํ•˜๋Š”๋ฐ ์ด๋Š” ์‹ค์ œ IELTS ํ‰๊ฐ€ ๊ธฐ์ค€๊ณผ ๊ดด๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์–ด "take it with a pinch of salt(์ฐธ๊ณ ๋งŒ ํ•˜๋ผ)"๋Š” ์กฐ์–ธ์„ ๋‚จ๊ฒผ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • ๋ถ€์ ์ ˆํ•œ ์ œ์•ˆ: ieltspodcast.com์€ ๋ฌธ๋งฅ์— ๋งž์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์–ดํœ˜๋ฅผ ์ œ์•ˆํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด 'mobile phones'๋ฅผ ๋Œ€์ฒดํ•  ๋‹จ์–ด๋กœ 'dial'์ด๋‚˜ 'contact'๋ฅผ ์ œ์‹œํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ, ์ด๋Š” AI๊ฐ€ ๋‹จ์–ด์˜ ๋งฅ๋ฝ์„ ์™„๋ฒฝํžˆ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜์ง€ ๋ชปํ•˜๋Š” ์ „ํ˜•์ ์ธ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ, "on the contrary"๋ฅผ "but"์˜ ๋™์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ž˜๋ชป ์•ˆ๋‚ดํ•˜๊ณ  ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๊นŒ์ง€ ๋ฒ”ํ•˜๋Š” ๋“ฑ ์‹ ๋ขฐ๋„๊ฐ€ ๋‚ฎ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • ์ž˜๋ชป๋œ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ: EssayChecker.ai๋Š” ์—์„ธ์ด์— ์—†๋Š” ์ฒ ์ž ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๋ฅผ ์ง€์ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋“ฑ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋น„ํšจ์œจ์ ์ธ ๋ชจ์Šต์„ ๋ณด์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2. AI ๋„๊ตฌ์™€ IELTS์˜ ์ถฉ๋Œ: ์ˆ˜๋™ํƒœ์™€ ๊ฒฉ์‹

๋งŽ์€ AI ๋„๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๊ณตํ†ต์ ์œผ๋กœ "passive tense(์ˆ˜๋™ํƒœ)"๋ฅผ ์‹ซ์–ดํ•˜๋ฉฐ ์ด๋ฅผ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๊ฒฉ์‹์ ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํŒ๋‹จํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ IELTS ๋ผ์ดํŒ…์—์„œ๋Š” ์ˆ˜๋™ํƒœ๊ฐ€ ์ ์ ˆํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋  ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ๋†’์€ ์ ์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๊ตฌ์กฐ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. Fiona๋Š” AI๊ฐ€ ์ˆ˜๋™ํƒœ๋ฅผ ๋Šฅ๋™ํƒœ๋กœ ๋ฐ”๊พธ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ œ์•ˆํ•  ๋•Œ, ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด ๋œ ๊ฒฉ์‹์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋ณ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ง€์ ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3. ChatGPT์˜ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅ์„ฑ

ํ…Œ์ŠคํŠธํ•œ ๋„๊ตฌ ์ค‘ Fiona๊ฐ€ ์œ ์ผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ถ”์ฒœํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์€ ChatGPT์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

  • ์ƒ์„ธํ•œ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ: ChatGPT๋Š” ๋‹จ์ˆœํžˆ ์ ์ˆ˜๋งŒ ๋งค๊ธฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ, ๊ฐ ํ‰๊ฐ€ ํ•ญ๋ชฉ(Task response, Lexical resource ๋“ฑ)์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์ธ ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•ด ์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • ์ƒํ˜ธ์ž‘์šฉ: "rephrase(๋‹ค์‹œ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ)"๋ฅผ ์š”์ฒญํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ํŠน์ • ๋ฌธ์žฅ์˜ ์–ด์ƒ‰ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ์ง€์ ํ•ด ๋‹ฌ๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ๋•Œ ๋งค์šฐ ์œ ์šฉํ•œ ๋‹ต๋ณ€์„ ์ œ๊ณตํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • ํ•œ๊ณ„์ : ๋‹ค๋งŒ, ChatGPT๊ฐ€ ์ œ์‹œํ•œ Band 9 ๋ฒ„์ „ ์—์„ธ์ด์กฐ์ฐจ ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํ‰๊ฐ€ํ–ˆ์„ ๋•Œ Band 7~8 ์ˆ˜์ค€์œผ๋กœ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚˜๋Š” ๋“ฑ, AI๊ฐ€ ์™„๋ฒฝํ•œ IELTS ๊ธฐ์ค€์„ ์ถฉ์กฑํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋ณด๊ธฐ๋Š” ์–ด๋ ต์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๊ฒฐ๋ก : ๋„๊ตฌ๋Š” ํ•™์Šต์˜ ๋ณด์กฐ ์ˆ˜๋‹จ์ผ ๋ฟ

Fiona๋Š” AI ๋„๊ตฌ๋ฅผ "replace teachers(๊ต์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ๋Œ€์ฒด)"ํ•˜๋Š” ์ˆ˜๋‹จ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ, ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์ด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ์—ฐ๊ตฌํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฐœ์„ ์ ์„ ์ฐพ์•„๊ฐ€๋Š” "any tools they can(ํ•™์Šต ๋ณด์กฐ ๋„๊ตฌ)"์œผ๋กœ ํ™œ์šฉํ•  ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊ถŒ์žฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŠนํžˆ, AI๊ฐ€ ์ œ๊ณตํ•˜๋Š” ์ œ์•ˆ์„ ๊ทธ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ˆ˜์šฉํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ณด๋‹ค, ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์—์„ธ์ด์—์„œ ๋ฐ˜๋ณต๋˜๋Š” ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋‚˜ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์  ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋‚ด๋Š” ์šฉ๋„๋กœ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ํ›จ์”ฌ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๊ฒฐ๊ตญ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋ฌธ๋งฅ์„ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ณ  IELTS์˜ ์ฑ„์  ๊ธฐ์ค€์ธ 'Task Response' ๋“ฑ์„ ์ •ํ™•ํžˆ ํŒŒ์•…ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ฉฐ, AI๋Š” ์ด๋ฅผ ๋ณด์กฐํ•˜๋Š” ์—ญํ• ๋กœ์„œ ํ™œ์šฉํ•  ๋•Œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ํฐ ์‹œ๋„ˆ์ง€๋ฅผ ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๐ŸŽฏKey Sentences

1
The problem with that is the test is really expensive, isn't it?
๊ทธ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ฒ€์‚ฌ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ์ •๋ง ๋น„์‹ธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฑฐ๊ฒ ์ฃ , ๊ทธ๋ ‡์ง€ ์•Š๋‚˜์š”?
2
I'm really in favour of AI tools.
์ €๋Š” ์ธ๊ณต์ง€๋Šฅ ๋„๊ตฌ์— ์ •๋ง ์ฐฌ์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ์ž…์žฅ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
3
I'm not against them.
๋‚˜๋Š” ๊ทธ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ๋ฐ˜๋Œ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฑด ์•„๋‹ˆ์•ผ.
4
But There are drawbacks.
ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋‹จ์ ๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
5
It's not too far off
๊ฑฐ์˜ ๋‹ค ์™”์–ด.
๋ชจ๋‘ ํŽผ์น˜๊ธฐ

๐Ÿ“Key Phrases

1
look into
์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๋‹ค
2
take something with a pinch of salt
์—๋ˆ„๋ฆฌํ•ด์„œ ๋“ฃ๋‹ค
3
can't abide
์ •๋ง ์งˆ์ƒ‰์ด์•ผ
4
in favour of
์ฐฌ์„ฑํ•˜์—ฌ
5
internalize the information
์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ๋‚ด๋ฉดํ™”ํ•˜๋‹ค
๋ชจ๋‘ ํŽผ์น˜๊ธฐ

๐Ÿ“– Transcript

Hi there, this is Fiona from IELTS with Fiona, and this week I've been looking into online IELTS writing checkers.
Now, there are two reasons for this.
The first reason is that I started getting a lot of questions about how can I check my IELTS writing score.
And the answer was, well, you can just go and do the test.
The problem with that is the test is really expensive, isn't it?
And by the time you've paid for travel and hotels and everything, it costs quite a lot.

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