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[IELTS ์Šคํ”ผํ‚น ์™„๋ฒฝ ๋Œ€๋น„: '์ด๋ฉ”์ผ(Emails)' ์ฃผ์ œ ์‹ฌ์ธต ๋ถ„์„]-[๐Ÿ“ง Emails (S07E28) + Transcript]

IELTS Speaking for Success ยท B1 ยท 2022-08-15

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๐Ÿ“‹ Summary

IELTS ์Šคํ”ผํ‚น ํŒŒํŠธ 1: '์ด๋ฉ”์ผ(Emails)' ์ฃผ์ œ ์™„๋ฒฝ ๊ฐ€์ด๋“œ

๋ณธ ํŒŸ์บ์ŠคํŠธ์—์„œ๋Š” IELTS ์Šคํ”ผํ‚น ์‹œํ—˜์˜ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์ฃผ์ œ์ธ '์ด๋ฉ”์ผ(Emails)'์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋‹ค๋ฃจ๋ฉฐ, ๊ณ ๋“์ (Band 9)์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ์–ดํœ˜์™€ ํ‘œํ˜„ ์ „๋žต์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์€ ํ˜„๋Œ€์ธ์˜ ์ผ์ƒ์—์„œ ๋–ผ๋ ค์•ผ ๋—„ ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ๋„๊ตฌ์ด๋ฉฐ, ์ด๋ฅผ ์ฃผ์ œ๋กœ ํ•œ ๋‹ต๋ณ€์€ ์ผ์ƒ์ ์ธ ์†Œํ†ต ๋ฐฉ์‹๊ณผ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์˜ ๋ณ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๋Š” ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์„ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

1. ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์‚ฌ์šฉ์˜ ์ผ์ƒ์„ฑ๊ณผ ์—…๋ฌด์  ๊ฐ€์น˜

Rory๋Š” ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์ผ์ƒ์—์„œ ๋งค์ผ ํ˜น์€ ์ดํ‹€์— ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์”ฉ ๋ฐ˜๋“œ์‹œ ๋“ฑ์žฅํ•˜๋Š” ํ•„์ˆ˜ ์š”์†Œ๋ผ๊ณ  ์„ค๋ช…ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŠนํžˆ ํ•™์ƒ์ด๋‚˜ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ ๊ธฐ๊ด€์— ๋ฌธ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ „์†กํ•  ๋•Œ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์€ ํ•ต์‹ฌ์ ์ธ ์—ญํ• ์„ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ 'features in my day(๋‚ด ์ผ์ƒ์˜ ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ์ฐจ์ง€ํ•˜๋‹ค)'์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ์ผ์ƒ์ ์ธ ํ™œ๋™์„ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋ฌ˜์‚ฌํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์œ ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ, ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์ˆ˜์‹ ์ž๋ฅผ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” 'copying people in(์ฐธ์กฐํ•˜๋‹ค)'์ด๋‚˜ ๋ฌธ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ฒจ๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” 'attach certain documents'์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ์‹ค๋ฌด์ ์ธ ์ƒํ™ฉ์„ ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋ฌ˜์‚ฌํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ํฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2. ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆ์ผ€์ด์…˜ ์ˆ˜๋‹จ์˜ ๋ณ€ํ™”์™€ ๋น„๊ต: ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ vs ๋ฉ”์‹ ์ €

ํ˜„๋Œ€ ์‚ฌํšŒ์—์„œ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ๊ณผ ๋ฉ”์‹ ์ €๋Š” ๊ฐ๊ธฐ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์œ„์น˜๋ฅผ ์ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. Rory๋Š” ๋ฉ”์‹ ์ €๊ฐ€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ๋ณด๋‹ค 'a bit more informal(์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋” ๋น„๊ฒฉ์‹์ ์ธ)' ๊ฒฝํ–ฅ์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ง€์ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ ํ˜„์žฌ ๋ฉ”์‹ ์ €๊ฐ€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์˜ ์ฃผ๋œ ์†Œํ†ต ๋ฐฉ์‹์„ 'overtake(์ถ”์›”ํ•˜๋‹ค)'ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์ถ”์„ธ๋ผ๊ณ  ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๋ฉฐ, ์ด๋Š” 'more popular'ํ•ด์ง€๋Š” ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์  ํ๋ฆ„์„ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด, ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์€ ์—ฌ์ „ํžˆ ์—…๋ฌด์ ์ด๊ณ  ๊ณต์‹์ ์ธ ์†Œํ†ต์˜ ์ค‘์‹ฌ์— ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ, ๋ผ๋””์˜ค๋‚˜ ์ „ํ™”๊ฐ€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์˜ ๋“ฑ์žฅ ์ดํ›„์—๋„ ์‚ฌ๋ผ์ง€์ง€ ์•Š์•˜๋“ฏ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ๋˜ํ•œ ์™„์ „ํžˆ ์‚ฌ๋ผ์ง€์ง€๋Š” ์•Š์„ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ด€์ ์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3. ๊ณ ๋“์ ์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์–ดํœ˜ ๋ฐ ํ‘œํ˜„

  • Commonplace: 'Common'๊ณผ ์œ ์‚ฌํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ํŠน์ • ํ˜„์ƒ์ด ์–ด๋””์—๋‚˜ ์กด์žฌํ•˜๊ณ  ๋ณดํŽธํ™”๋˜์—ˆ์Œ์„ ๊ฐ•์กฐํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ณ ๊ธ‰ ์–ดํœ˜์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • Eclipse: 'Replace(๋Œ€์ฒดํ•˜๋‹ค)'๋ผ๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ฐ˜๋ณตํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ์„ธ๋ จ๋œ ํ‘œํ˜„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด, "Emails will not totally eclipse letters(์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด ํŽธ์ง€๋ฅผ ์™„์ „ํžˆ ๊ฐ€๋ ค๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ์ง€๋Š” ์•Š์„ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค)"์™€ ๊ฐ™์ด ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ, ๊ธฐ์กด์˜ ์ˆ˜๋‹จ์ด ์™„์ „ํžˆ ์†Œ๋ฉธํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ƒํ™ฉ์„ ๋น„์œ ์ ์œผ๋กœ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • Not overly fussed: 'I don't care(์ƒ๊ด€์—†๋‹ค)'๋ฅผ ๋” ์ •์ค‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์›์–ด๋ฏผ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ์‹์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ƒ์ผ ์ถ•ํ•˜ ๋ฉ”์‹œ์ง€๋ฅผ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ๋กœ ๋ฐ›๋“  ์นด๋“œ๋กœ ๋ฐ›๋“  ์ƒ๊ด€์—†๋‹ค๋Š” ๋งฅ๋ฝ์—์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

4. ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์  ๊ด€์ ๊ณผ ๋””์ง€ํ„ธ ์ •๋ฆฌ ์Šต๊ด€

์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์˜ ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์  ์ด์ ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋…ผํ•  ๋•Œ, ์ข…์ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ํŽธ์ง€๋‚˜ ์นด๋“œ๋ณด๋‹ค 'environmentally friendly(ํ™˜๊ฒฝ ์นœํ™”์ ์ธ)'ํ•˜๋‹ค๋Š” ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ํŽผ์น  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋™์‹œ์— ์„œ๋ฒ„ ์œ ์ง€๋กœ ์ธํ•œ ์—๋„ˆ์ง€ ์†Œ๋น„ ๋ฌธ์ œ์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋ฐ˜๋ก ๋„ ์กด์žฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋”๋ถˆ์–ด, ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ๊ด€๋ฆฌ ์Šต๊ด€์€ ์ˆ˜๋งŽ์€ 'unread emails(์ฝ์ง€ ์•Š์€ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ)'๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ์ฒด๊ณ„์ ์ธ ์„ฑํ–ฅ์„ ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ข‹์€ ๋Œ€ํ™” ์†Œ์žฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๊ฒฐ๋ก ์ ์œผ๋กœ, ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ฃผ์ œ๋ฅผ ๋‹ค๋ฃฐ ๋•Œ๋Š” ๋‹จ์ˆœํžˆ ์‚ฌ์šฉ ์—ฌ๋ถ€๋ฅผ ๋„˜์–ด, ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์˜ ๋ฐœ์ „์ด ์†Œํ†ต ๋ฐฉ์‹์— ๋ฏธ์น˜๋Š” ์˜ํ–ฅ๊ณผ ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์  ๊ณ ๋ ค์‚ฌํ•ญ, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋””์ง€ํ„ธ ๊ด€๋ฆฌ ์Šต๊ด€์„ ์•„์šฐ๋ฅด๋Š” ๋‹ต๋ณ€์„ ๊ตฌ์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๊ณ ๋“์ ์˜ ํ•ต์‹ฌ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๐ŸŽฏKey Sentences

1
Probably every day, if not every other day, I do.
๊ฑฐ์˜ ๋งค์ผ, ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๊ฒฉ์ผ๋กœ๋ผ๋„ ๊ผญ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”.
2
So it definitely features in my day.
๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ œ ์ผ์ƒ์—์„œ ํ™•์‹คํžˆ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ์ฐจ์ง€ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”.
3
I would imagine so, since you usually have to contact stores or colleagues via email.
๋ณดํ†ต ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ๋กœ ๋งค์žฅ์ด๋‚˜ ๋™๋ฃŒ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ์—ฐ๋ฝํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์œผ๋‹ˆ, ์•„๋งˆ ๊ทธ๋Ÿด ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š”.
4
Sending messages in a messenger is seen as a bit more informal and very few people text these days.
๋ฉ”์‹ ์ €๋กœ ๋ฉ”์‹œ์ง€๋ฅผ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋” ๊ฒฉ์‹ ์—†๋Š” ํ–‰๋™์œผ๋กœ ์—ฌ๊ฒจ์ง€๋ฉฐ, ์š”์ฆ˜์€ ๋ฌธ์ž๋ฅผ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋„ ๊ฑฐ์˜ ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
5
So I doubt they'll disappear entirely.
๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์™„์ „ํžˆ ์‚ฌ๋ผ์ง€์ง€๋Š” ์•Š์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”.
๋ชจ๋‘ ํŽผ์น˜๊ธฐ

๐Ÿ“Key Phrases

1
if not every other day
์ดํ‹€์— ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ๊ผด์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ๋ฉด
2
features in my day
์˜ค๋Š˜์˜ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ
3
via email
์ด๋ฉ”์ผ๋กœ
4
overtake
์ถ”์›”ํ•˜๋‹ค
5
outdated
์‹œ๋Œ€์— ๋’ค๋–จ์–ด์ง„
๋ชจ๋‘ ํŽผ์น˜๊ธฐ

๐Ÿ“– Transcript

Hello, Sunshine.
I'm Maria.
And my name is Rory, and we're the hosts of the IELTS Speaking for Success podcast, the podcast that aims to help you improve your speaking skills, as well as your listening skills along the way.
We've started this podcast to give you modal answers, gorgeous vocabulary and fabulous grammar for your high IELTS score.
It's for a band 9 score.
Maria, what are you doing?

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