In Chapter 20 of the narrative, the criminal underworld led by Fagin and Bill Sikes faces a turning point. After the failed attempt to abduct Oliver Twist, the group finds themselves in a precarious position. The atmosphere in Fagin’s room is thick with tension as they deliberate their next move, acknowledging that it “would not be as easy to snatch Oliver in the street again.”
The most unsettling figure in this meeting is the mysterious man known only as Monks. Described as having his “hat pulled low over his face” and a “red scar across his left cheek,” Monks introduces an element of danger and secrecy that unnerves even the hardened criminal, Bill Sikes. Monks is adamant about the necessity of recapturing the boy, hissing that Oliver “is a danger to us all.”
Bill, inherently suspicious, questions the stranger’s motives. He notes that while everyone in their circle has secrets, “there was something different about Monks.” Monks refuses to disclose his true intentions, cryptically stating, “I have information about Oliver Twist that I want to keep a secret.” He insists that Oliver cannot remain with Mr. Brownlow, as it would mean “the end” for their operations. Despite the lack of trust, Fagin and Bill realize they are tethered to this man because he possesses “access to places and money that they did not.”
Amidst this dark plotting, Nancy remains a focal point of psychological tension. While she performs her domestic duties, “cooking sausages on the fire,” her demeanor is notably “pale,” “tired,” and “worried.” When she attempts to leave the room to visit Bette, the interaction turns confrontational. Fagin, ever the manipulator, suggests they might “suspect you to have something to hide,” a comment that provokes an immediate, defensive outburst from Nancy. She reminds them of her lifelong loyalty, asking, “Haven't I been stealing for you and cooking for you since I was a young girl?”
Bill eventually permits her departure but issues a stern warning: “Just be home in two hours if you know what's good for you.” This exchange highlights the crumbling trust within the group and Nancy’s increasing alienation from the criminal life she has known since childhood.
The chapter concludes on a chilling note. Shortly after Nancy departs, Monks abruptly exits the room and “rapidly walked up the dark street in the same direction as Nancy.” This movement suggests that the conspiracy is not merely directed at Oliver Twist, but that internal surveillance and mistrust have reached a boiling point. The reader is left with a sense of impending dread, as the lines between the conspirators blur and the vulnerability of characters like Nancy is exposed to the predatory nature of men like Monks.